les pauvres cœurs


Tuesday, November 6, 2007

pseudo-linked tanka

you are
consistently
a mistake
I am glad
to make

on the level
that is to say
I on the counter
your nakedness
before me

the night
was almost normal
as I lay on your chest
silently encircled
by your arms

an arm around
my naked waist
an open window
I think
it's going to rain

1 comment:

Agent Jellie said...

Mmmmmm... I like this one.